... even encouraged me. So , I am not feel choppy , I still have a dream that is awaiting to be fulfilled...
...emphasize a specific point... too many is just too much and the paragraph gets choppy
...通常是說, The wind is too high 或是說 The wave is too choppy. 此外, 如果浪頭很高, 或是風很大, 通常是一個遠處海上有鋒面正在活動的...